I am weak but at least..

This poetry moves around slaves, about how they feel when we order them..Hope you will like it!
The God sent us to the earth as a free soul,
But,
The rich of the world made us their slave
Those who shout, have to write their will
And those who remain, have to forget about their vein
I was thinking, how to get myself out from this jail?
Which they call a world,
Although i am weak but at least, i feel,
I believe that none is poor and none is richer except by their deeds.
This world is like a seed,
What you will grow,
You have to eat.
Your shout can heal anyone's wound and that isn't just easy.
I would rather prefer to kill myself, then to kill my dignity
I stand against them,
And,
I won and they lose,
The dignity won and their brutality lose,
I was feeling satisfy and richer than those fools,
Who prefer to stay silent and don't feel their woes.
.Forest of Acrimony is a poem which explains, how a man feels his bitter past and tries to bring new light but he couldn't because his scars are too deep and old to recover. But he goes on to form a fearless and tougher version of himself..
The poem is about love that improves a person's life. If the presence of other person improves your life and comes as your true strength in fighting with failures, then it is true love in my eyes.
Spring is one of the conventional temperature season,preceding summer and following winter,it means rebirth and renewal..
Your poem somewhat tells us that we should never be slave in spirit... I agree with that and we need to get out of it so we can totally experience the real meaning of freedom. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Keep it up!
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