Poverty and Crisis are the sources of child labour. It is in-human, we should try to abolish this social misfortune.
Child in labour is a social crime ;
Rights of the children should be prime,
Poverty is the main source of child labour ;
Feature of the children will end forever ,
Poverty and crisis are not their fault;
Child labour problem we should halt,
Children are the future of present ;
People should realize the children consent ,
Social consciousness can diminish it ;
We should not be the social culprit,
Innocency in their childhood fight ;
Do not know the wrong and right ,
Solution of childhood we should find ;
Keeping intact their sacred mind ,
Children are consider as the gift of god ;
Save the children from social fraud ,
Love , affection and illusion are their thirst;
Child labour is the social curst ,
Attention of government should be draw ;
We should maintain the child labour law..
Love can destroy the cruelty of mind. Love create peace in human mind .
We get torn between what we want and what we do not. It's worse when we know what we want but need to give up on it due to the people we love..
Money makes pleasure but it may be a tragedy.It is indispensable for human life. .
It is sad that child labor happens, Many countries rely on children to produce goods that are shipped to the USA. We do not condone these actions and yet it still happens. In other countries children can be on their own from age 7 and they become easy victims. To bring this sadness to light in a poem was a good way to get your message out to the masses. In a perfect world this would never happen.reply 0
A truth which sadly still exists in society. Nicely written and noteworthy thoughts! But, speaking about the fluency of poem, the use of correct grammar, proficiency of English used and the way it's presented, it needs to be improved in some manner. Like, there's no need of using commas, some missing grammar, for eg: in 8th line, it must be, "People should realize children's consent" still, I'll recommend, "People must realize children's consent" in simple way to be more effective. Just a suggestion with good intentions for improvement, no intentions to criticize your work.:)reply 0